Thanks for sending this.
This is an early draft, right?
I'll fix some typos etc. in it (patch attached) and add some whitespace.
Please see RD: in the patch for more questions/comments.
IMO it needs some changes to eliminate words like "we", "you",
and "your" (words that personify code). Those words are OK
when talking about yourself.
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~Randy
Phaedrus says that Quality is about caring.