Re: [1/3] POHMELFS: Documentation.

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From: Michael Kerrisk
Date: Monday, October 27, 2008 - 8:05 am

Evgeniy,

Some comments / fixes below.

On Thu, Oct 23, 2008 at 1:56 PM, Evgeniy Polyakov <zbr@ioremap.net> wrote:

simple


Probably better:
... except creation of hard and symbolic links, and rename events.
?


"an error"


pick up (two words)


The sense is unclear at "as long as writing" -- can you reword?


s/appropriate/ an appropriate/


"a special"


"a given index" or "the given index" --I'm not sure which is meant here.


"are updated"?


transaction


"the system checks that servers have to be" (Note: 3 fixes in that text.)


"an error"


This is the number of times that a transaction will be resent to a
server that did not answer for the last @trans_scan_timeout
milliseconds.

"the number"


"the transaction"


"a single"

"controls"

"the number"


"the number"


"the server"


"the given"


"the working set"


"the working set"

I've stopped here for the moment.  There are many other cases below
where an article ("a" or "the" is needed) -- this matters because
without the right article English can be ubclear.  If you want to
review my suggestions, and fix the remaining cases, you can CC me on
another draft for review.

Cheers,

Michael




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[0/3] POHMELFS: the new release. Extended attributes., Evgeniy Polyakov, (Thu Oct 23, 11:54 am)
[1/3] POHMELFS: Documentation., Evgeniy Polyakov, (Thu Oct 23, 11:56 am)
[2/3] POHMELFS: Core., Evgeniy Polyakov, (Thu Oct 23, 11:56 am)
[3/3] POHMELFS: VFS changes (2 exports)., Evgeniy Polyakov, (Thu Oct 23, 11:57 am)
Re: [1/3] POHMELFS: Documentation., Michael Kerrisk, (Mon Oct 27, 8:05 am)
Re: [1/3] POHMELFS: Documentation., Evgeniy Polyakov, (Mon Oct 27, 9:17 am)