Re: [PATCH 1/2] dm-band: The I/O bandwidth controller: Source code patch

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To: Ryo Tsuruta <ryov@...>
Cc: <containers@...>, <dm-devel@...>, <linux-kernel@...>, <virtualization@...>, <xen-devel@...>
Date: Wednesday, January 23, 2008 - 9:33 am

Hi,

I'm not qualified to comment on the code, but here are some suggestions on
config option and comments.

Cheers,
FJP

Ryo Tsuruta wrote:

s/band width/bandwidth/
(it seems to be used correctly elsewhere, but you may want to double-check)


s/band-width/bandwidth/

The help should probably be a bit more verbose as this does not tell anybody
much who has not already read the documentation.

Maybe something like:
<snip>
This device-mapper target allows to define how the
available bandwith of a storage device should be
shared between processes or cgroups.

Information on how to use dm-band is available in:
   Documentation/device-mapper/band.txt
</snip>

                    ^^^^^^^^^^^


s/a right/the right/


"The larger the return value, the higher the priority [...]"


s/when there exist some BIOs blocked/if some BIOs exist that are blocked/ ?

"none of them can't" : the double negative looks incorrect (and should be
avoided anyway)


s/have/has/

"has to do something" : that's rather vague...
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Re: [dm-devel] [PATCH 0/2] dm-band: The I/O bandwidth contro..., Alasdair G Kergon, (Wed Jan 23, 10:47 am)
Re: [dm-devel] [PATCH 0/2] dm-band: The I/O bandwidth contro..., Hirokazu Takahashi, (Wed Jan 23, 12:21 pm)
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Re: [PATCH 1/2] dm-band: The I/O bandwidth controller: Sourc..., Frans Pop, (Wed Jan 23, 9:33 am)