Re: [PATCH 20/33] memory controller add documentation

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To: Paul Menage <menage@...>
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Date: Tuesday, September 18, 2007 - 12:53 pm

On Mon, 17 Sep 2007 14:03:27 -0700 Paul Menage wrote:



"," makes run-on sentence.  Please use ";" or 2 sentences.


Ditto.


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                                   ^drop second hyphen (use space)


"," makes run-on sentence...


s/removes/remove/


2. ??  Section numbering is "off."


   0. Kernel build configuration
[snip]


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[PATCH 20/33] memory controller add documentation, Paul Menage, (Mon Sep 17, 5:03 pm)
Re: [PATCH 20/33] memory controller add documentation, Randy Dunlap, (Tue Sep 18, 12:53 pm)