On 10/8/07, Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net> wrote:

Some minor rewording suggestions:

quoted text
> + (b) Any problems, concerns, or questions relating to the patch have been
> +     communicated back to the submitter.  I am satisfied with how the
> +     submitter has responded to my comments.
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Replace the last sentence with "I am satisfied with the submitter's
response to my comments." or "The submitter has responded to my
comments in a way that satisfied my concerns."

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quoted text
> +
> + (c) While there may (or may not) be things which could be improved with
> +     this submission, I believe that it is, at this time, (1) a worthwhile
> +     modification to the kernel, and (2) free of known issues which would
> +     argue against its inclusion.
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I would suggest dropping the "(or may not)" as unnecessary, and
changing the "which would" to "that would".

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quoted text
> +
> + (d) While I have reviewed the patch and believe it to be sound, I can not
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From a legal standpoint, "I do not" might be preferable to "I cannot",
since it disclaims any intention to make such a statement, regardless
of qualification.

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quoted text
> +     (unless explicitly stated elsewhere) make any warranties or guarantees
> +     that it will achieve its stated purpose or function properly in any
> +     given situation.
> +
> + (e) I understand and agree that this project and the contribution are
> +     public and that a record of the contribution (including my Reviewed-by
> +     tag and any associated public communications) is maintained
> +     indefinitely and may be redistributed consistent with this project or
> +     the open source license(s) involved.
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(e) seems over-careful, especially since you're applying it only to
the Review-by tag, while all the other tags would also have the same
concern.



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scott preece
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