On Tue, May 08, 2007 at 05:10:47PM +0200, Johannes Schindelin wrote:
Looks helpful, concise, and to the point. Neat-o.
Acked-by: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
Comments, nothing major:
Might want to add "in a recent commit"?--it's not clear that you've
transitioned away from talking about the initial commit.
Unless the reader has already been hanging out on the mailing list a
while, "most libified" may not mean much to them yet at this point.
The organization of the next bit is slightly confusing: we're set up to
expect a longer lecture on the revision walker, but instead there's just
the historical note on git-rev-list, a mention of 'revision.c',
'revision.h', and 'struct rev_info', and then it rapidly digresses into
discussing builtins.
Which actually is fine, but just a few small markers of where we are in
the discussion might be reassuring--a section header or two, maybe a
little more emphasis on the pointers you're giving, like: "take a moment
to go read revision.h and revision.c now, paying special attention to
struct rev_info, which ....".
--b.
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