Re: [PATCH] Add a birdview-on-the-source-code section to the user manual

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From: J. Bruce Fields
Date: Tuesday, May 8, 2007 - 8:18 pm

On Tue, May 08, 2007 at 05:10:47PM +0200, Johannes Schindelin wrote:

Looks helpful, concise, and to the point.  Neat-o.

Acked-by: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@citi.umich.edu>

Comments, nothing major:


Might want to add "in a recent commit"?--it's not clear that you've
transitioned away from talking about the initial commit.


Unless the reader has already been hanging out on the mailing list a
while, "most libified" may not mean much to them yet at this point.

The organization of the next bit is slightly confusing: we're set up to
expect a longer lecture on the revision walker, but instead there's just
the historical note on git-rev-list, a mention of 'revision.c',
'revision.h', and 'struct rev_info', and then it rapidly digresses into
discussing builtins.

Which actually is fine, but just a few small markers of where we are in
the discussion might be reassuring--a section header or two, maybe a
little more emphasis on the pointers you're giving, like: "take a moment
to go read revision.h and revision.c now, paying special attention to
struct rev_info, which ....".

--b.
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